WEEK 7 : Blog evaluation
08:30
This week, we were each called to the lecturer's desk for a one-to-one blog evaluation session. I have written down a list of comments that I had received about my blog entries and how I think I can improve to write better and high quality contents.
Criticism
1- The use of slang found in some of my blog entries.
2- No annotations of the pictures or contents that I have put in.
3- Incomplete blog entry
How I can improve on my blog writing
1- Annotate : add notes to (a text or diagram) giving explanation or comment.
When posting up any contents, for instance a picture, I need to explain further what the picture is displaying to clarify the purpose of it being put up.
2- Do not use slang words - They are considered informal and unprofessional. The contents of my blog have to be formal hence the use of proper vocabulary and fashion terms are required.
3- Do not ever plagiarize - Taking someone else's work and making it your own without crediting the owner is accounted as stealing. I am allowed to use the information that I have found on the internet for reference but I still need to give credits to the owner. They have worked hard to research thus I have to make an effort myself.
4- Include the use fashion terminology and identifying fashion details on garments.
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